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Ugh, I thought that might happen. you'll have to zoom in on the image if you want any less white space/ a bigger image. The screen being that size is a product of the software I used to code it, and I couldn't find any way to change it : |

I've added them in, you can download them from the same place as the HTML version. Let me know if the Windows one works, I can't run it on my computer.

Is an EXE easier to run? I don't really know what the advantage of EXE would be. If you'd like, I can attach it as a windows, mac or linux electron application.

i really like the spriting, but the movement speed is a little bit slow, which detracts from the experience. Additionally, you might consider having the player character move full squares instead of half squares.

yeah i could've made that more clear, lol

right there? it's a tabletop game so i did the list of classes

Good luck!

I think that the key to making a game like this work is to have very engaging characters. With such a dialogue heavy medium, you need to make players want to put in the effort to interact with npcs. (I would recommend character creation as a main, early focus) If you look at something like Disco Elysium, the gameplay is simple but people adore it because the dialogue is written extremely well. 

As for the premise itself, I think that it seems interesting. I'll look forward to seeing how this develops.

Through The Cracks

An index-card based  urban fantasy TTRPG with a focus on mystery and discovery. Built for 1 DM and 2-4 players. I had a focus on unique, highly specific classes when making this game, of which there are 26. 

https://mild-iron.itch.io/through-the-cracks

I'm Andrew (He/Him). I've worked on and subsequently abandoned a couple different systems before managing to complete my first one. I enjoy magic system development and speculative evolution. I'll respond most readily here on Itch.

Hey thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to read through it, really.

I downloaded on mac, and it said the file was damaged and could not be opened.

I've been trying to get some feedback on a TTRPG I've been working on for a while, and this seems like the place to do so. I've generated a set of download keys for you to use, with the stipulation that feedback would be greatly appreciated. 

Unused
https://mild-iron.itch.io/through-the-cracks/download/FJemygTmfEymPyu7WmKR28Dfa-...

https://mild-iron.itch.io/through-the-cracks/download/NPemygTmfEymPyu7WmKR28Dfa-...
Used

https://mild-iron.itch.io/through-the-cracks/download/QNemygTmfEymPyu7WmKR28Dfa-...

Through the Cracks is a card-based urban fantasy TTRPG, with a focus on exploration and mystery. 

https://mild-iron.itch.io/through-the-cracks

Through the Cracks

https://mild-iron.itch.io/through-the-cracks

Just released my new TTRPG, Through The Cracks. It's a rules-moderate urban fantasy system with a focus on mystery and exploration.  Check it out here!

https://mild-iron.itch.io/through-the-cracks