I love a weird sci-fi setting, and this one really delivers on that, with good writing and some really lovely art. The portraits are great. Definitely found the story intriguing and would like to learn more. This really felt like something out of the '70s in the best possible way. Reminded me a little of Valérian and Laureline in particular.

As for the silly acronyms, I kind of liked them. They were a bit of a tonal mismatch here, but I think it was mostly fine, since it added a little levity. BALLS and SHAFT seemed a bit much at first, but once I got to the fight, it made sense. Might be worth re-considering depending on how serious you want the story to be, but it was funny at least.

It took a while for me to get into the groove of it, but I liked it a lot when I did. The scifi concepts are cool, and the writing on the erotic scene at the end is particularly nice.

I do think the silly acronyms like ASS and SHAFT tend to spoil the more serious tone of the story somewhat.

Just finished my playthrough.

I find the setting a bit strange, kind of old sci-fi inspired, where strange situations are explained rather quickly. But the pilots are both very cute, and I'll keep an eye out to see what happens to them =)

It's cool how well the backgrounds fit your character art despite the difference in styles. There's just a nice visual dynamic between the portraits, the backgrounds and the text that I really like.

You've definitely got your own writing style, it's descriptive, a bit goofy, but dead serious and even somber all at the same time. Since the story seems to continue from an earlier game, I got a bit lost in the relations and terminology. I'm guessing that you don't want any story branches, but as an alternative, you can try offering choices that don't influence the narrative but maybe temporarily shift the reader's point of view.

I enjoyed how well the music complements the rest of the game, very well picked. There's definitely a good sense of unity between all of the game's elements working together.