It had potential, but I think you rushed this a little too much...
The main issue here is how the story flows... It starts great, but then it just... I have no idea where it's going actually. It felt like a dream, but that doesn't look like it...
I think what you should have done differently that maybe could change this to a 4/5 is just one thing... Change that random red skeleton to that guy that chases us, and add some creepy dialogue of him... This way the story is just about us going back home, but things get weird and THEN a creepy guy start chasing us, but we manage to escape and go back to our home to finally rest.
Ignoring the confusing story, the game has a great ambiance and scene building. It's a bit amateur-ish, considering that train part where it runs over us, even though we dodged it... It was still a pretty cool game.
Not sure if you plan on coming back to it, but would be cool to see some post-jam updates. Good luck. :)